Syntactic Features¶
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Syntax¶
Syntax is the patterns, principles, and rules of sentences in a given language.
How to describe and categorize sentences:
- by structure
- by voice
- by function
- by length
- by irregular structure
Sentence Types by Structure¶
| Type | Structure | Effect |
|---|---|---|
| Simple | one independent clause | clear, direct, easy |
| Compound | independent clauses joined by coordination | linear, supplementary, easy to process |
| Complex | main clause + subordinate clause | hierarchical, embedded, cognitively demanding |
| Compound-complex | coordination + subordination | layered, complex, argumentative |
FANBOYS: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
Example
Simple:
The sparrows are flying around.
Compound-complex:
For in the end, freedom is a personal and lonely battle; and one faces down fears of today so that those of tomorrow might be engaged.
and: coordination.so that: subordination.- Effect: layered reasoning.
Garden Path Sentences
Examples:
The old man the boat.Fat people eat accumulates.While Susan was mending the sock fell off her lap.
Effects:
- parsing trap
- cognitive delay
- surprise
- ambiguity
- playfulness
Sentence Types by Voice¶
| Voice | Pattern | Effect |
|---|---|---|
| Active | agent foregrounded | direct, clear, responsible |
| Passive | patient/process foregrounded | objective, impersonal, academic |
| Passive evasive | agent omitted | responsibility-avoiding, political, bureaucratic |
Example
Academic passivization:
The researcher designed a questionnaire of 25 questions and distributed the copies randomly to the students in the library.
becomes:
The questionnaire, consisting of 25 questions, was designed for the present research and randomly distributed to the students in the library.
- Focus shifts from researcher to questionnaire / procedure.
- Effect: objective, formal, impersonal.
Example
Evasive passive:
Mistakes were made.
- Agent omitted.
- Responsibility blurred.
- Common in political or institutional discourse.
Sentence Types by Function¶
| Function | Example | Effect |
|---|---|---|
| Declarative | It was the best of times... |
assertion, narration, judgment |
| Interrogative | Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? |
inquiry, opening, rhetorical movement |
| Imperative | Do not go gentle into that good night. |
command, appeal, urgency |
| Exclamatory | Rage, rage against the dying of the light! |
emotion, intensity |
Sentence Length¶
Sentence length may be measured by:
- words
- syllables
- characters
Plain English guideline:
All short will sound stupid. All long will sound stuffy.
Key:
| Sentence Length | Possible Effects |
|---|---|
| Short | direct, concise, terse, clear, swift, compact, abrupt, unexpected |
| Long | solemn, formal, detailed, complex, sophisticated, messy, confusing, suffocating |
Example
Joyce, Ulysses
Molly's soliloquy:
- approximately 22,000 words
- eight extremely long "sentences"
- last sentence: 4,391 words
Effect:
- stream of consciousness
- fragmentary
- incoherent
- associative
- lengthy
- emotionally intense
Example
Joyce, Ulysses
- Minimal punctuation.
- Extremely long syntactic flow.
- Thoughts move by association: nature, God, memory, desire, sea, Gibraltar.
- Repeated
yescreates rhythm and affirmation.
Final movement:
and yes I said yes I will Yes.
Example
D. H. Lawrence, The Horse Dealer's Daughter
Pattern:
- short / medium sentences
- active voice
- sequence of bodily action verbs
Verbs:
- crouched
- moved
- touched
- grasped
- laid
- wiped
- wrapped
- lifted
- staggered
Effect:
- physical
- urgent
- tense
- concrete
- sequential
Example
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
At length, quite exhausted by the attempt to be amused with her own book, which she had only chosen because it was the second volume of his, she gave a great yawn...
Structure:
- complex sentence
- embedded clauses
- delayed main action
Effect:
- elegant irony
- indirect exposure of motive
- contrast between social performance and actual boredom
Irregular Structures¶
| Structure | Definition | Effect |
|---|---|---|
| Elliptical sentence | omitted elements recoverable from context | speed, informality, compression |
| Inverted sentence | unusual word order | emphasis, literary tone, formality |
| Rhetorical question | question not seeking information | persuasion, emotion, dramatic force |
| Non-standard form | dialect / social variation | identity, realism, social positioning |
Inversion¶
Example:
So deep was her sorrow that words failed her.Try as he might, he could not change the past.Only in solitude can a man hear his inner voice.Little did he realize what great changes lay ahead.
Effects:
- foregrounding
- emphasis
- formal / literary tone
- rhythmically marked expression
Rhetorical Questions¶
Effects:
- persuasive
- emotional
- forceful
- audience-involving
Example
Blake, The Tyger
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
- Not merely asking for information.
- Expresses awe and mystery.
Example
Shakespeare, The Merchant of Venice
If you prick us, do we not bleed?
If you tickle us, do we not laugh?
If you poison us, do we not die?
And if you wrong us, shall we not revenge?
- Repeated rhetorical questions.
- Persuasive assertion of shared humanity.
Sentence Branching¶
| Branching | Structure | Style |
|---|---|---|
| Right-branching | main clause first, supplements after | loose, easy, natural |
| Left-branching | modifiers / conditions before main clause | periodic, anticipatory |
| Middle-branching | nesting / embedding inside main clause | complex, interruptive, sophisticated |
Loose vs. Periodic Sentences¶
| Type | Pattern | Effect |
|---|---|---|
| Loose sentence | core idea appears early, then supplements | supplementary, easy, natural |
| Periodic sentence | main idea delayed until later | anticipatory, suspense-making, sophisticated |
Example
Middle-branching:
Love, as everyone knows except those who happened to have been afflicted with it, is blind.
Periodic / formal:
Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages.
- Main conclusion delayed.
- Effect: formal, argumentative, organized.
Austen:
It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a fortune must be in want of a wife.
- Formal and periodic opening.
- Sounds like a universal principle.
- Effect: ironic grandeur about marriage and social expectation.
Example
Original:
Were it not for hope and faith in the dark days ahead, few mortals could endure the hardships of mortal life.
Plain version:
Few mortals could endure mortal hardships, if they had no hope and faith in dark days.
Difference:
| Original | Plain Version |
|---|---|
| inverted, periodic | regular, direct |
| formal, elevated | clearer, easier |
| literary rhythm | plain statement |
Example
Original:
He walked slowly down the street and looked quietly at the quiet old town.
Revised:
Along the quiet old street under soft dusk, he walked slowly and gazed peacefully around.
- Fronted setting creates atmosphere.
gazed peacefullyis more stylistically coherent thanlooked quietly.
Example
Joseph Heller, Catch-22
Pattern:
- extremely long sentence
- right-branching structure
- repeated relative clauses
- chain of causes and consequences
- comic escalation
Effect:
- absurdity
- bureaucratic chaos
- logical sprawl
- comic violence
Catch-22:
A paradoxical situation from which an individual cannot escape because of contradictory rules or limitations.
Readability¶
Readability is the ease with which a reader can understand a written text.
Depends on:
| Dimension | Factors |
|---|---|
| Content | vocabulary, syntax |
| Presentation | font size, line height, line length |
Tools:
- The Flesch formula
- The Gunning Fog Index
- The Lexile Index
Flesch Formula¶
where:
nosw: number of one-syllable words per 100 wordssl: average sentence length in words
Intuition:
- more one-syllable words -> easier
- longer average sentence length -> harder
Gunning Fog Index¶
Measures reading difficulty by roughly considering:
- average sentence length
- percentage of complex words
Higher index:
- more difficult
- more "foggy"
- requires more education to read comfortably
Lexile Index¶
The Lexile Analyzer evaluates reading demand through:
- semantic characteristics: word frequency
- syntactic characteristics: sentence length
Range: 0-2000
Higher values usually indicate greater reading difficulty.
Limits of Readability Tools¶
Readability is not literary value.
Balance:
- readability
- formality
- variety
- stylistic purpose
Notes:
- Short words and sentences may be readable but flat.
- Long or difficult syntax may be stylistically motivated.
- Chinese readability tools are relatively few and lagging behind.